Cupric song

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bhaskar, Sep 27, 2005.

  1. Bhaskar

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    Supple as a wish,
    the tendrils of her song
    sprinkled the night
    like stained glass.

    Astors and arabesques
    splashed in the sounds;
    the trills of blue
    and citrus in E flat major,
    before drizzling into the night
    a trail of nameless colors warbling in their wake.


    I met her at the library today.
    She laughed
    and I named the colors of her eyes.
     
  2. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    thats very unique.. your style and abstractism! it has a delectable pace
     
  3. EternalHunter

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    I'm so glad you are back!:)
     
  4. Bhaskar

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    Than you :)
     
  5. steffan

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    best one i have read today
     
  6. sylvanlightning

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    Very beautiful, how romantic... :)
     
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