crushing the world

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by joker, May 11, 2005.

  1. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    there's nothig i can say,
    there's nothing i can do,
    everything has been said,
    everything has been done,
    nothing has fuckin change,
    it never fuckin will,
    this world will always be the same,
    chaos has become a trend,
    destruction is my best friend,
    i don't want this,
    i don't need this,
    ignorance is human nature,
    goddamn i want to crush this nightmare with my fist.
     
  2. crackforkids

    crackforkids Senior Member

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    very depressing :(
    ive felt like that before.

    im a rythm nut. id change the way a few things are said to get a better flow, but thats me.

    i need to gain control again
    make a new, exciting friend
    get in school
    not act a fool
    change my life
    put down my knife

    i need to gain control again
    before the world comes to an end
     
  3. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    i see. ure a lyrical poet. i'm a free verse poet when it comes to just writing and not adding music. i just rhyme only when i'm writing a song.
     
  4. crackforkids

    crackforkids Senior Member

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    i have two persons
    who share a head
    i call it mine
    but they're inside
    they take turns every day
    to make me act two different ways
    one looks down
    one looks above
    one says hate
    and one says love
    one is happy
    one is sad
    one is friendly
    one is mad
    one will cry
    and one will fight
    one is dark
    and one is light
    one is paper
    one is plastic
    one is calm
    one's exstatic
     
  5. headymoechick

    headymoechick I have no idea

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    I don't feel comfy enough to share a poem in a new thread, but I'll share one with you guys

    I don't really write or think about it, I just say what I feel.

    THis is how I feel now, but don't laugh ok?


    Look into my eyes and make them sparkle with laughter

    hold my hand and we'll jump over the waterfalls of a new beginnning

    are you ready?

    I won't let go!

    look into my eyes one more time.

    trust me
     
  6. crackforkids

    crackforkids Senior Member

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    ode to crack

    O crack, thing of taboo
    how interesting i do find you
    when i smoke a big ol boulder
    i straighten out my lil shoulders
    i think so fast
    that now is past
    i want more
    yes, i want more
    ill rob a store
    to get some more



    [hahahahahahahha keep in mind ive never done crack that IS a joke]
     
  7. crackforkids

    crackforkids Senior Member

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    ill take you through the feilds of laughter

    get lost in the sands of time

    climb these mountains of emotion

    cross the stormy sea of aingst

    climb the rising trees of ecstasy

    and float into the lake of tranquility

    and we can be complete



    woah! since when do i get all sappy? your too cool headymoechick.
     
  8. headymoechick

    headymoechick I have no idea

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    lol, it's good to be all sugary sweet and sappy sometimes. I forget about all the crappity crap that's going on. (drugs help too)

    It makes me giggle! tee hee!
     
  9. Dr. L Ludmerding PhD

    Dr. L Ludmerding PhD Member

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    Hey everybody! Does this little girl sound like she's been beaten bloody and stalked mercilessly by an ex-boyfriend as she claims she has been?

    I don't think so!

    I think the little girl lies!
     
  10. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    that's kinda wrong and offensive. and don't judge the girl if u don't know her.
     
  11. headymoechick

    headymoechick I have no idea

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    it's sad that you're so pathetic that you follow me around just to talk shit.
     
  12. crackforkids

    crackforkids Senior Member

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    thats so not cool. why would she lie? if she did i wouldnt care. why do you? is she supposed to be sad and mopey all the time 24/7? i know my mood changes rapidly, and if she is finally feeling better and you bring that shit up. thats GREAT

    give people the benefit of the doubt man. cause if shes not lying (i dont think she would) than you are being so overly dick.
     
  13. headymoechick

    headymoechick I have no idea

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    would you be happy if I posted a pic of all the bruises and cuts on my face? I don't need to prove myself to anyone.

    but thanks for reminding me to not reach out to people when I really need it
     
  14. Dr. L Ludmerding PhD

    Dr. L Ludmerding PhD Member

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    Live and learn children. You are all so young and niave without much life experience!

    If you guys are to stupid to spot a vindictive lying little girl, good luck (you'll need it!)!
     
  15. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    he should be banned for saying such ignorant shit like this. sometimes i don't know why i even come here.
     
  16. headymoechick

    headymoechick I have no idea

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    [​IMG]

    I laugh at people like you. Sorry, but people who are close minded, and jump to conclusions aren't worth my time

    Good day.
     
  17. crackforkids

    crackforkids Senior Member

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    you need to prove nothing hmc...
     
  18. headymoechick

    headymoechick I have no idea

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    jeez, I never post in poetry (because I suck and everyone else here is so good)

    I thought I'd be safe from the flamers here!
     
  19. Dr. L Ludmerding PhD

    Dr. L Ludmerding PhD Member

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    That ain't very hippy of ya! Believe in censorship when your own panties are in a bind?

    I know why you come here. Because you have nothing better to do!
     
  20. Faerie

    Faerie Peachy

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    dr. ludmard ludmerding

    How did i know your first name????

    Loser!!!
     
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