Cloud Talk

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheLizardKingMike, Mar 14, 2006.

  1. TheLizardKingMike

    TheLizardKingMike Members

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    There’s a void in the clouds
    A warm palace of tempting pleasure
    Delicate delight
    Ease into your tepid bath
    Shower your blues away

    The darkness dissolved
    By the passing light
    The day divided
    By the falling night

    Swallow your fear
    Clasp the chalice in your hand
    Sip slowly
    Now understand

    Away in atmosphere
    The voices are growing near
    Flutter down
    To forgotten foothills
     
  2. BannedInDC

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    Your sig says it all! Nice work!
     
  3. TheLizardKingMike

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    Indeed, we are all inside the bodies we were given. I don't remember who said it, my buddy told me it and I understood and agreed immediatley.
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Kind of like "the soul is not in the body, the body is in the soul."

    Anyways, I really dig your poem man.
     
  5. TheLizardKingMike

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    Exactly, we are inside the skin. Thanks man, I really like this one too. It's nice to see you on here man, it's been a while.
     
  6. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Yeah, just wasn't feelin the vibe, you know? My head's been in the wrong place lately for writing.
     
  7. TheLizardKingMike

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    Hey man, you can't force it, just let it come when it does. Otherwise you'll just get frustrated.
     
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