Climbing Boston

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SvgGrdnBeauty, Mar 21, 2007.

  1. SvgGrdnBeauty

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    Mountain climber, walk streets of Boston
    Far away from your wilderness home
    Tumbling weary throughout the city
    So lost and feeling all alone

    "Where are the tress that are my brothers?
    Why is the river so dirty here?
    Why does it matter if my socks are red now?
    Can't anyone understand the way I feel?"

    Mountain climber at the Charles bank now
    Wondering where all of the fish have gone
    Hit by biking and jogging people
    Too consumed in their iPod songs

    "Why these street lamps and the buildings?
    Why this train in the middle of the road?
    Is there anyone in this city who understands my troubles?
    Or will I forever be all alone?"

    Mountain climber on the T now
    Given change from a passing bum
    Gone to seek her fortunes elsewhere
    For nature isn't so combersome

    "Goodbye Boston
    Thanks for showing me
    The place where I really belong
    Among the springs of mountain beauty
    Off to Maine and the birds' sweet songs"
     
  2. Malapascua

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    This poem hits me.
    I grew up in Boston, almost drown in the Charles River,
    and was tossed off the T a few times.

    I love the way you expressed your thoughts on the big, unfeeling city, vs.
    the laid back style of Maine, a place where I spent quite a few summers.

    Very nice work..............
     
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