Bug

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Carlybee, May 23, 2009.

  1. Carlybee

    Carlybee Member

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    Hi all..I'm a newbie...thought I would share some of my poetry



    Bug


    I am a bug on the windshield
    smeared like honey in the pouring rain

    existent but non existent

    I am merely the sum
    of my smashed remains
     
    Carlybee, May 23, 2009
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  3. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    hahah, clever.

    I was amused at the single rhyme scheme. it really drew the piece together and it was a nice surprise to an otherwise short poem.
     
    rambleON, Jun 1, 2009
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  5. Carlybee

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    Thanks! :)
     
    Carlybee, Jun 2, 2009
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