beyod conclusion

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by quietthinker, Oct 31, 2006.

  1. quietthinker

    quietthinker Member

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    i'm inspiried by my intuition. I strive to become greater than the sun. I'm composed of my insecurities; i make way through a world that has become undone.

    a journey began in search of satisfaction. to recognize the purpose in destiny.

    glorify the simple minded
    make them seem full of righteousness
    sanction the dog for expanding his territory
    blame the youth for their nature to respond with in-depth: anylixation.

    searching:satisfaction:universal: intelligence: dont under-estimate the few: their minds may be greater than the sun

    elevating my levels of understanding by projecting myself beyond conclusion.
    observing the way we live our lives through actions only visible through the eyes of the beholder.

    do and you, may not want to ever return to this existence
    do and you, too, may realixe the truth of this existence
    do and you, as well: a few others; may be brought together to fight a war thats plagued this world for longer than any would wish for you to imagine

    I dare... you.



    i wrote this last night iw as just wondering what people would think of it, usualy poems as these i leave for msyelf, more personal
     
  2. lanaia74

    lanaia74 Member

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    Totally AWESOME!
     
  3. mrswoo

    mrswoo Member

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    Thought provoking. I enjoy the part where you engage the reader "I dare you"...it inspires a sort of indignation, and a feeling of wanting to DO something...
     

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