Beautiful Mess

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  1. matt1703

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    I wrote this song a few days ago, after a pretty crazy night out. Ive never done this before, and i would like to hear other people's opinions on it. Its not fully finished, and is open to suggestion, hope u enjoy..


    Beautiful Mess

    ''how did we get home?
    how did i manage to send them drunken texts on my fucking telephone?
    where did these cuts come from?
    these are all the questions that may try and disgrace us,
    but heres one i ask on a day-to-day basis,

    how did i get myself in such a Beautiful Mess?
    when did i strike gold, and end up like this?
    should i quit while im ahead?
    or should i push the boundaries once again?
    how did i get myself in such a Beautiful Mess?

    who was that girl i kissed?
    oh shit, she would be top of the list
    we were dancing and drinking, laughing and drinking
    and heres what im thinking...

    how did we get ourselves in such a Beautiful Mess?
    when did we strike gold and end up like this?
    should we quit while we're ahead?
    or should we push the bounaries once again?
    how did we get ourselves in such a Beautiful Mess?''




    if u think its a load of crap, say so, just want to know what people think.
    (would be kinda indie/rock, maybe similiar to the view or the kooks)
    :cheers2:
     
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