Its a song but since there is no songs forum Ill stick it here. Feel free to tell me how to improve it.: When the leaves fall off the trees I love to watch them in the autumn breeze I sit around and watch the show Until its dark and i have to go I walk along and i get the bus I see the people all in a rush Take my time and keep it slow I dont care where I go *chorus* I feel the touch of the autumn breeze I see the rain and the wind in the trees I feel the cold but I dont mind Autumn is my favourite time I know what ive been told but some days u wanna stay out in the cold See the darkened sky ignite With the sunset of an autumn night
A lovely feeling of autumn, thanks. Not that I'm in any way qualified to judge, but I stumbled on the bus line a little, it doesn't seem to flow as well as the rest? Maybe it is the way that I'm reading it. Would like to hear it sung.
lovely words I would love to hear a tune set to it...I am not a musician so it is a little difficult to imagine...I did like it tho very peaceful
Well u might be in luck for hearing it coz i just got some new recording stuff for my pc so i might be able to stick it up sometime on the forums. Fingers crossed
