An angels dream

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by guinea, Feb 23, 2007.

  1. guinea

    guinea Member

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    So sweet and innocent
    she does sleep,

    i can't help but wonder,
    what does she dream?

    does she dream of happiness and laughter?
    or of her charming prince to come and save her?

    what does an angel of astonishing beauty,
    dream of when she sleeps?
     
  2. sexbanshee

    sexbanshee Member

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    Oh lovely lovely lovely....

    *sigh*

    (whispers....hope you dont mind but it is spelt astonishing with an a....if you submit for publishing you may wish to amend this)...
     
  3. guinea

    guinea Member

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    thank you, spelling is not one of my best aspects, and sometimes i even make up words cause my vocabulary is also limited
     
  4. dragonangelbiker

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    that was good. i really liked it . keep on writing my friend
     
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