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Alien

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by April90, Jul 10, 2010.

  1. April90

    April90 Member

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    The cradle of despair.
    The ever-winter air.
    Is anybody there,
    Beneath this dreadful moon
    Evoking thirst for tears?
    I'm screaming - no one hears.
    I breathe the same old fear
    That I'll be dying soon.
    My soul strays and hovers,
    My heart is under covers,
    My lonely secret lovers -
    The clouds and the sea -
    Can grant me no salvation
    Within my heart's temptation.
    In this dilapidation
    I see no way to flee.
     
    April90, Jul 10, 2010
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  3. lmc71775

    lmc71775 Banned

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    Very nice. It's like a rap poem. Although it isn't in real meter form, I still think it's good. Unique
     
    lmc71775, Jul 12, 2010
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