a poem i wrote in college

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  1. Zooth

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    this is a poem i wrote for a girl i had feelings for, but was to scared to tell her, though i did show her the poem, but again was too scared to tell her it was about her

    Ode To Her


    When I first saw you,

    I wondered what you are,

    An angel from above,

    Or a siren from afar.



    At first you despised me,

    For you did not yet know,

    What I had in store for you,

    To make sure you did not go.



    When the world closed in on me,

    I tried to let you go,

    Yet I loved you too much,

    And you didn’t even know.



    As I sit here now

    Watching you slip away,

    I wonder because I did not tell you,

    Is this the price I have to pay?







    yep i'm one of the poets that have to rhyme. :p
     
  2. mudpuddle

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    Tell her!!!

    You'll Regret it if you Do Not...
     
  3. Zooth

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    i'm afraid its too late, i rarely see her anymore, though i am planning on phoneing her at some point next week, possibly visiting her, but i know that she doesnt feel the same way, and i dont want ruin the already fading freindship, at least i can revive that
     
  4. mudpuddle

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    Atleast tell Her the Poem was for Her...
     
  5. Zooth

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    well that may reck the friendship, maybe when its a bit more solid or when it disolves
     
  6. mudpuddle

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    Even if you're Just Friends...It's a Nice Poem...
     
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