a poem from my heart

ok well it took me a while to put this on here im really affarid what people will think of it so be nice

Insane?
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Is that what you mean
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When you live in reality
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And I live in a dream
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Its nice here
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So what if I’m mad
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I have all the things
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You secretly wish you had
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I’m sorry your trapped
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In that world full of hate
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But deep in your mind
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There is a gate
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don’t be afraid
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Just walk on through
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Its so amazing
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what the paths lead you to
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What are you doing
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You cant go back
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Reality is dead
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They’ve been attacked
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But its ok, they killed themselves
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I watched them dig there graves
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But I was here, in my land
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And that’s why I was saved
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Still wanna call me insane
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Well go ahead and try
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But ill be here in my world
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Watching your world die!
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By
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Brooke​

 

its good for the most part

 

thanks, i know most people dont like ryming peoms, i dont really that much either, but for some reason this one just worked.

 

i dont think it really matters either way, its the meaning that counts.

 

PEace,

i really like non rhyming poems. i foudn yours to be very true from teh heart. i love it! jsut be careful to point out what route there taking and which you chose to take and itle all be groovy! keep the truth

later

the tired flower child

 

its pretty good, good job