a poem ..for all

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, Jul 31, 2008.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    for all ..

    unlike the days,the creeping
    dawn,i hide from this.
    folded entwined not free,
    not free nor willing to be.
    whole.for our todays,
    grew from yesterdays'
    troubles and laughter.
    yet tomorrow may be the same.
    unlike the dusk our setting life.
    i will not comply.will be swept
    unto the murky pools that ,
    round and round they move.
    unlike the night,its silver sheet
    i will not give in to that fear......

    thank you
    lovenpeace from saff
    quick poem just wanted to share this.
     
  2. DroopySnoopy

    DroopySnoopy The ORIGINAL Dr. Droop

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    Very nice, please share more with us. :)
     
  3. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    I really liked the ending and the way the previous lines built up to it. *snap snap!*
     
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