a phish lyric poem type thingy

I just had the idea the other day to write a poem about what the phish scene was about and becoming a phishead. Anyway I tried to do it with just a few lines, mabye put it on a t-shirt or hoodie or somethin later, i dunno. But anyway, I thought it was a cool idea, if anyone has any suggestions of lines to add to this poem or wants to create there own this is the place, and I highly recommend it, its fun.

Here we show ourselves in likeness
tryin to live a life thats completely free
will you plunge in and join me here
the trick is to surrender to the flow
fly famous mockingbird
your gonna be a genius anyway

 

i like the idea of using phish lines to make t-shirts. but maybe if it was less choppy and rhymed for the sake of cleverness. just some friendly suggestions from your phello phriend.

 

the idea kicks ass....i think you have some choice lines, just find a way to tie them in a little more.....but anyway, smart thinking...

 

Yea - great idea!

here's my stab at it


Dreams can take flight
Can I live while I’m young?
things will be alright
Can you still have fun?
Maybe so and maybe not
this one is for you

It's more of a poem, not really something that could be on a shirt

 

Come stumble my mirth beaten worker
I'm Jezmund the family berzerker

I just came up with that.

 

GENIUS

 

^ thats pretty clever lemme try one
how about.......
wash uffize
drive me to firenze??