here are a few of my poems. PM me if you'd like some more. insight i watch as my life slowly passes by, and i bite my lip as it quivers praying to god, dont let me cry i feel the rain surround me now in all its cold glory and i wrap my arms around myself wishinng someone could save me but i know deep down that all i have is me and i know i have to reach out and take my own hand and i know i have to belive that everything truly does happen for a reason and i cant stop it i just neeed to close my eyes a little tighter, and hold on with all my might i need to keep in mind, that the end of this storm, will soon be in sight stars the stars are everywhere tonight, and they are burning bright. i wish nothing more to than sit wrapped up in a flannel blanket with you on a snowy bench, and look up at them. the stars are beautiful, but i mean come on now, everything is more beautiful, more momentous, when you are there. so im sitting here, outside, on a snowy bench, with my flannel blanket, the stars everywhere, but one thing is missing....your arms around me, your hands entwined with mine. looking at stars will never be the same without you. lovers they lay in the tall grass hair back in dreads hands entwined together the world is loud and horrible but their galaxy is quiet and peaceful nothing can reach them its just the two lovers of the same kind sharing an afternoon in the tall grass
awww theses poems are so cute 'i bite my lip as it quivers'...all 3 of these create a really nice sort of..um..setting..no thats the wrong word...um...you've just created this scene that's tremendously sensitive and delicate
