a little rhyme i whipped up.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Keeper of the Forest, Apr 9, 2008.

  1. Keeper of the Forest

    Keeper of the Forest Member

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    you look at me for i am blind
    but i can see inside my mind
    you're beauty is a summer breeze
    and it will pass like your disease
    so stare and judge me
    but in due time
    you will see whats in my mind
    look beyond what you may see
    into the depths inside of me
    for there is where the truth doth lie
    never be decieved by your own eye
     
  2. jim the carpenter

    jim the carpenter Member

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    poetry is a gift from above
    and you my friend have it in your soul
     
  3. Keeper of the Forest

    Keeper of the Forest Member

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    thank you, that really is quite the complement, and means a lot to me.
     

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