a deeper meaning?

the sky opened clear
a creak appeared
through it i was inhaled
then spit back, unveiled

unveiled of altered knowledge
and the pavement split
through it marriage
of terms spoken and writ

so into darkness i decended
mental wounds mended
until the darkness ceased
my cured self released

i came to realization
and nothing was itself
but a symbol of what is true
then i was left

alone with my perceptions
my living dreams
with their dreamy lives
that's how it seems

they speak to me in languages
of the tongue, not eyes
while i communicate my purpose
through a soul which never dies

until reaching a day
whith which there's no sould left
to communicate
​

 

That's really good man. It's got a nice rhyme with good imagery. Keep on truckin' bud.

 

thanks man

 

very good poem with good line enjambments great job especially for someone of your age.

 

thank you. i wrote that one night when i went to sleep for about five minutes and woke up with some images in my mind.