A chrome within realities.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippychrome, Jun 23, 2005.

  1. hippychrome

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    A heart and mind open yet the conscienceness is blind,
    our spirit sees,
    we listen and hear but sometimes can't understand.
    Words sometimes jumble, meanings broken,
    the reception is strong but the understanding sometimes is gone.​
    Is it self induced,
    is it fear?
    One knows it is life,
    but can one bear to live it?
    Afraid of what may come,
    afraid of what is,
    afraid to move,
    surrendering to who knows what,
    living life still,
    afraid to put any ripples upon the pond of life for fear of hurting oneself or others.​
    Am I truly but a dream within realities,
    a reflection upon a mirrorball,
    a consciousness floating within a sphere of chrome?​
    This planet is too small,
    the sphere of existence too confined...​
    ' Peek-a-boo ' , I shout as my consciousness is occasionally let loose,
    but yet a reality which binds us always pulls me back.
    Yet finding the path and direction to live...
    I do surrender, but can not see it.​
    A mind within mirrors?​
    Yet its hard to see the divine light shining through which is the path, but also gives the illumination to see the mirrors.​
     
  2. EmbraceInnerPeaches

    EmbraceInnerPeaches Member

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    A mind within mirrors........ Very interesting poem I loved reading it I think its awesome
     
  3. hippychrome

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    Thanyou for your kind words I.P :) , I've been a bit outta it lately and thats the 1st piece of poetry to be freed again for quite some time lol.

    I live within a dream within realities.
    Sometimes a nightmare, sometimes enlightening,
    but whatever it all is,
    chrome and reflections live.

    Welcome to the forums :) . I hope you have a good time :) . There's lots of interesting and friendly people about as you'll find :).
     
  4. hippychrome

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    Is more than one reflection one too many?
     
  5. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Nice read ChromeOne. Haven't had any poetry in my soul lately so I haven't wandered this way lately.
     
  6. hippychrome

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    Neither have or did I princess, but, sometimes... sit there, blank your mind and RELEASE ... it helps [​IMG] . Even if it seems blank wait and just let it free be it seemingly pos or neg. Let your spiritual writings FREE themselves. It is a lifeform unto itself... Xpress yourself and let it be freed.
     
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