I liked this piece. I agree with what your saying here. It takes time for love. Keep writing hun! -Cassi
I really enjoyed this piece. It made me think of this place I used to go. It's in the middle of the woods in Bethel, NY. It's so beautiful there....
Eve's Apple Come, Adam, let me tempt you With my bountiful fare Kiss lips as ripe and sweet as Strawberries on a summer's day Savour the...
That was so deep that it gave me goosebumps. I felt you anger and your pain. Excellent piece! I hope that things turn from dark to light for you. :D
I think it's a great start. Can't wait to read it when it's finished. I had stopped writing for a few years and now just getting back into the...
Wow that brought a tear to my eye. It made me think how beautiful our planet is. It also made me think of what were doing to our planet and what...
I've been writing poetry since I was able to read and write. I had stopped for a few years. I guess it was writers block or even being too busy. I...
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