I really liked it, I serioulsy alomst cried reading it. That was really good, I am amazed. Thank a lot for sharing it!
My heart aches with pain My body searches to be held truely I feel as if my body has released a new person from my soul These eyes see love, but...
I don't think you are going crazy, cuz a few days ago i woke up with kinda the same thing. It's like a few inches below my right wrist, it looks...
I get Deja Voo alot and I think it's creepy and really awesome at the same time. When I get deja voo it will last for like a couple of mins and...
Ohh I liked that. When I was reading it, it made me go "aaaww" Good poem I liked it! Thanks for sharing it.
I liked that....when I was reading it I thought I was reading one of my poems cause it sounds like something I would write. Thanks for sharing
I really liked that, it was good. I really like the flow of it, it caught my attention. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for the comments guys. I like how you edited my poem Osiris it sounds a lot better now, it makes it feel like there is more meaning, thanks...
Wind blowing threw the streets of a cold winters day The lonely boy cries out But no one feels his pain Sinking deeper into the hole Doesn't know...
That was an intersting poem I must say. Made me laugh
It's been a long ride Now it's come to a stop Kept on going Samething over and over But now is the time Time to pick another rollercoster I could...
aaww such a cutie!
ooohhh I liked this one, it was different than others and thats good. I liked your choice of words and the flow of the poem. Thanks for sharing!
That is my favorite line! I liked it a lot. I loved the flow of your poem, it flowed well. Good job and thanks for sharing!
*wrote this awhile ago when I was bored, and I was thinking about sex, and how good it can feel* Passionate screams going threw my mind Raging...
hahah I like that, sounds like me at night when I am bored and need to go to sleep but can't cause I am too hyper and energetic. I enjoyed it,...
I loved the whole poem, I thought it was great. My favorite line is "When we can say we love and we do-" When I read that I was thinking...
Does it have to get dark already My fun was just about to begin I hope this doesn't happen again Summer wind, midnight swims Why do these times...
"a ring will makes it's way to the place on your hand and you'll show everyone how we'll be married someday" That's my favorite part...so sweet!...
AAWWW thank you for the comment. "Woke up, burnt eyes" That's my favorite part too.
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