Hahaha...that was cute!
He pulled gossamer elephants from the sky as we crushed grass-angels beneath sweat sticky backs. So beautiful. He is so beautiful with that...
Thank you. :)
Incandescent moonlit whisps trickled down your face like warm wax on candlesticks. Now, I stare blankly into the luminescent glow, exhausted...
Muscles tense; inhale, Release... Lame, isn't it, That I swab my tongue with lidocaine To drown out the bitterness of you? and me ...Numb. Yet...
Nice.
I quite enjoyed this. It reminded me of some stuff that a friend of mine used to write. It was original, almost like a conscious stream of...
Nice. Makes me wanna do some yoga. :)
Kept reading it over and over, and was unhappy with it, so I decided to redo it. Here's the old version:...
yep...the surgery took 2 and a half hours. I still have bone fragments working their way up to the surface and I can't open my jaws all the way...
Good luck with that! I had mine done 4 weeks ago, and I'm STILL recovering! and thanks lanai! :)
I don't know why we call them "wisdom teeth". There's nothing wise about them; I have found third molars make you want to loose your mind. They...
You definitely have a flair for words. Beautifully written.
How terribly sad but beautiful in an anguished sort of way. Keep writing.
Breathtaking imagery, captivating prose, beautiful lyrics. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks.
Poigniant. I like "days run like trains"...And to answer the question: truth, definitely, is the hardest pill to swallow.
The eager tingling tounge of Spring lapped away at the stark, colorless blanket of snow, exposing thin sheets of ice beneath. I remained frozen,...
Hey there...I've read several of your works, and have enjoyed them. I completely understand this one firsthand because I've been there...I hope...
I don't know why, but this really took me in...I kept wanting it to have some sort of rythm for some reason, but yet I enjoyed the "free verse"...
I would be flattered if my husband wrote ANYTHING...that gets an A for effort and a big ol' AWWWWWW...it was very pretty. And I love butterflies;...
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