Thanks for the comment. You're right on both counts. Redundant and in there for the rhyme. I just was having fun with it as these were thoughts...
The Little Box I was raised in a little box in which there was a God who spent his time reading my thoughts and threatening me with death...
It seems you have projected a lot into this person you have noticed on the park bench. I do not believe you have the capability to do this and...
Well. I like the voice in this poem and the way it comes across, theres a person here writing this. It's a lot different from stuff I write, but...
It depends on where I am. If I am on the back porch I like to use a pencil and paper. When I do that I just but down the idea outline and trust...
Lol. That is funny. It made me remember a cat I had. He was an unneutered male who had a harem in the barn across the street. Well one time he...
Haven't traveled the world like some. Tried to be a 'good' hippie and be true to what I understood to be what was 'good' about it. Found myself...
Yes 16 is too young to use drugs. The personality has not established itself enough. I was 24 when I first took LSD and I had no preparation for...
I feel this way too. I will take it a step further. I find it to be a spiritual experience. I like to view my lover as a sanctuary and her body as...
Listen to your dad. You are too young, imo, to be dating.
I agree on this. my resort is to the blues medium. I have mucho blues music and they get right into the why and hows and what to do's about...
I have found that love is something that comes from knowing the other person and then appreciating them and growing closer to them with a deeper...
Well without a definition I didn't vote. What passes for patriotism in the U.S. is a blank check for idiots to do what they want as long as they...
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Hi everybody. Thanks for the welcome. Still haven't had a chance to look around yet but will try and do so.
Just registered. Name's Dave. If you check out my profile you can find what I am up to through various blogs etc. Passages is mainly poetry and a...
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