“Y’all ready for this shit?” It was blared through a p.a. system at unreasonable decibels. The call was answered by a loud cheer from the...
The two agreed that they should find shelter before any opportunity arose for Trelion to be seen by another human. Truant moved Trelion to a tree...
Here's the rest of the first chapter. They rested in silence for a minute, and then Truant was struck with a solution. He checked his pack, and...
Interesting...would like to read some more.
Here's some more for you Trippin BTM, if you're still interested. “Of course you do not. I was speaking to the animal,” was Trelion’s reply....
Here's the next bit of nonsense. This is actually one of the sections I'm the least confident about. Dear Pooter, (One time, once, in as...
Okay, no criticism so far but I didn't put much out there so, here is the next part. This is a second opening or "prelude". It is intended to be...
Hello. I just joined the forum so greetings to all. I was hoping to gather some criticism for a story I've been working on. It's called "A...
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