2 parallel poems watched while listening to Bach - Passacaglia and Fugue in C Minor Listen to these dark forebodings of Bach fugues in minor keys...
Right on. I don't want to get into this whole shit storm right now because I'm too happy to think about it but let me just say I agree with what...
Oh man, this poem is great but the replies are hilarious. I speak mystical jibba jabba and psuedo beat jive. I think we all speak our own...
this is incredible stuff. You're a capital P Poet. I'm a sucker for constellation talk. "kites to fly the skies of my skin." Awesomeness. I...
This is nice. Your best lines come when you don't bind yourself to the rhyme scheme. Free your verse and your mind will follow. "Our purpose is to...
hahaha, this is some truth right here. Keep pens everywhere. "more or less" I was about to say it always seems to be less, but realized...
I like the wheat growing from graves, new life from old life that gives it's life to sustain other life, i think it would make a good song, dough...
"inevitable washing machine cycle of time," brilliant. What's up with those pond trees anyway? I always wanted to know and fish don't answer me....
this is one of those perfect poems i've heard so much about
I really like this. I don't think you need to bold/italize that line cause it stands out enough without the added embelishment. Good stuffes
You've got a wealth of work here, I'm going to need to appreciate. Jumping around I see you are very skilled at the craft but more importantly...
you're like a shaman sculpting the smoke of bonfires into images archetypal and charged with power. Most impressive
How come the higher self speeks so softly? aptly titled
Dreamy dance to the music of the moon. Godiva meets Diana. Thanks for sharing your dream, it was a pleasure having it
fun stuff, it hopes along and then jumps a step, switches feet and onward it goes. The second one is truly great, that "er..." did the trick
to be so self-effacing and than post that.... this is awesome, it reads like waves and contains truth, what more can you ask from the sea. Well done
way to have a compass heart, those are hard to come by. I think you better listen to it. You probably know that though
color scheme motif again. I dig it, jackson pollock. Osiris, i like the tack on
this is good stuff, i dig the parentheticals, adds a very interesting rhythm change to it, like breaking the fourth wall and muttering under your...
This is one of the best things about the creative process: taking something unpleasant and/or regretable and bringing out the core of it so other...
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