i like it. it had a very calming effect on me. that was the purpose? i think.
i think that some of the rhyming sounds a little forced but it gives good imagery and has a very steady rhythm.
i have to agree with the whole thing about 2 different poems. i can understand where u were headed with it but seems like u need some type of...
One person, infatuating Another one, not noticing Foot to foot And wall to wall Walking in air Then the fall onto his face The carpet is...
its a very spiritual description that kinda gets u to want to find someone that'll give these "heavenly feelings." i enjoyed it.
hi im shryan and im new to this forum. i joined out the hope that some people here will be able to basically give some tye of response for my...
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