Sonnet With A Secret or, You Are Burst To Me Within The Heart
The human mind is an amazing thing. If you deprive yourself of "meaningful" sensations as much as possible - blindfold, white noise, lying still...
True, true. It's one of those balance things.
Ha ha. But, a wee bit of self-love does a world of good. I know half a dozen people who I wish I could teach to love themselves.
Nice one. I don't think much of the line "The funny roads they walk", though. "Funny" seems out of place.
I love this. Read it first not thinking of the title, then reread it with the title. Without it's deep, with it's clever.
Lightly, I have never
I was sceptical at first... but I liked the way it developed. :) Perhaps more of a stylistic contrast between the beginning and ending? You...
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