He spat. I spit. He ran. I flipped. “You never said go!” “Go!” He was gone. Footsteps. Foots left. The wind, my whine “Wait up! Not fair!” “No!”...
I’ll hit the bottle one last time Right before I say goodbye My words will be slurred And the smell will mask my emotion You’ll think its all...
It's like babylon I'll just drag my heart along You left me high and dry I have no one to complain to but myself So let it be so I couldn't...
Emergency Evacuation I didn't even know you left You left me no warning whatsoever Came and gone to another person Well now you're not my only...
As the wind blows north You can feel it's touch upon your skin Let it remind you of the one you loved. Let it remind you of those special...
wow this is pretty good. I love your humor. It never ceases to make me laugh So dark and sarcastic.
ok so this is a series of 9 poems that all tell one story. I'd love to get your feedback on this. c4c thanks! Optimist's Eyes Twilight comes,...
It's now or never make your move Your history reveals uncertainty Lacking vertebrae to be a man Can't you see you affect us all? You seem so...
I love the ending. Overall this is a very good piece. Some grammatical errors you may want to pick up on.
I can't be too sure, if this flowers in bloom it's face value is worth more than you could possibly imagine but underneath it lying deeper...
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