First uh.. poem ever.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Loser-aNm, Mar 22, 2005.

  1. Loser-aNm

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    If you dont count the stuff I wrote in English class 2 years ago, this is probably the first thing Ive written in awhile. So go ahead and say it sucks if it does.

    " Just how free are we?"

    Wave your flags, Kiss your kids
    send them off to school
    Just make sure to pat them down
    or youll look like the fool

    Kids kill kids, tell us why
    this world is so fucked up

    Some nazi fascist, lonely, loser,
    weilding a gun
    A misguided soul claims 10 lives,
    then his own
    just so he wont go alone

    this world is so fucked up...


    ................

    thats when I stopped, it didnt seem worth going on, I want this to be more of a punk rock song instead of a poem... Please dont get mad if I didnt get the whole paragraph thing right (i know there are certain ways your suppose to type poems, i just can remember them).

    btw I wrote this in like 10 minutes today, I was watching the news about the minnesota shooting.

    http://www.iht.com/articles/2005/03/22/news/shoot.html

     

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