my endless death

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Got_Culture?, Mar 21, 2005.

  1. Got_Culture?

    Got_Culture? Member

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    My endless thoughts are in a dream
    the waves the cure
    the pill the end, so what it seems
    The pill the end my friend is dead (R.I.P)
    My mind is my savior; it will never "Tell no more, no more"
     
  2. Benjibean

    Benjibean Member

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    this is a very simple piece but what suprises me most about it is the feeling that comes through it.
    very powerful.
     
  3. meduza

    meduza Member

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    thank you benjibean you are the man
     

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