Sincere Purity

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by kNoTTy J RoLLiNs, Mar 18, 2005.

  1. kNoTTy J RoLLiNs

    kNoTTy J RoLLiNs Member

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    This poem is about the love I have for my girlfriend, explained in the form of a poem to the best of my ability. I decided to use Abaab format, because it's almost never used, and love is almost never truly found. Kind of a meaning with a meaning if you will.

    Thought process in my mind

    moving in perpetual motion

    our hands, united, entwined

    it helps me to unwind

    never experiencing such devotion

    A moment of bliss, brings us together

    eternity in one solitary connection

    eyes meet, atlast no more bad weather

    Never a rain cloud nor an endeavor

    Could come in between this affection

    Feelings, come across so indescribable

    crossing a busy highway, it's dillusion

    placed my cards down on this bribe table

    got a royal flush, and am so unable

    To think straight, and in conclusion

    Found the meaning of well-being

    indolently gazing into greenish brown eyes

    Negativity has ran away, fleeing

    In the future, it's forseeing

    positive karma, no reason to improvise

    Truth, is in everytime she would smile

    Finding a better sense of sincere purity

    living has become so worthwhile

    love is seemingly versatile

    In a dream, that's become obscure surety

     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    :) beautiful
     
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

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    I like the rhyme effort. It is so tough to be subtle and non-invasive when working to a plan. You're trying hard! Write on!
     
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