A Room with No Windows

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Ceran, Mar 15, 2005.

  1. Ceran

    Ceran Member

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    This is one of the first poems I had ever written, and most people didn't understand it. Tell me what you think, and your interpretation of it:

    A Room with No Windows

    You hold us in your protective arms, Father,
    Shelter us in a room with no windows.
    It’s been so difficult to trust you lately.
    I’ve heard whispers of treachery
    From some of my brothers,
    And whispers of trust from the rest.


    I hear screams from outside of
    Our room with no windows.
    You try to cover the blood on your hands
    So we will not see…


    I remember on that bleak September day
    That a stranger came
    When our room had a single window
    He was insane, distraught,
    He hurt some of my brothers.


    You saved us, Father, but for a price.
    You boarded up our last window.
    The screaming became louder,
    The blood on your hands increased.


    You could hide it no longer
    So you spun a few lies
    You said the blood was evil,
    But why, then, do I hear screaming children
    Outside our room with no windows.


    I’m afraid, father.
    I’m afraid of the screams.
    But, mostly, I’m afraid of you.

     
  2. Joe Cool

    Joe Cool Member

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    i have a hunch its about the US
     
  3. Ceran

    Ceran Member

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    lol yeah. what do you think of it, though...?
     
  4. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    i would guess its about secracy
     
  5. Joe Cool

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    i like it , good analogy
     
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