Rain River Rain River Morning glory Time is slow Or maybe fast Secret story Feel the wind chimes Don't know where I'm going Or maybe I do Northern sunlight Poetry rhymes Stream's flowing Or maybe still Gently breezeway Running rainsticks It's all imagination Or maybe not
i think you really should think about showing this to others that is the best poem that i have heard by far!
Wow...thanks all for your positive feedback...I'm actually using for scholarships. Glad you all liked it!
I liked too, a nice easy read, very fast, the rhythm of the verse was well in keeping with the subject. Id still suggest bringing in one or two more telling images.
