Still Life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Razor Face, Mar 12, 2005.

  1. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    Still Life



    Incongruous hands that draw

    Judgments all numbered
    Shadow and color
    The eyes touch them
    If they can see as seers see

    Horizons always blue, all the frozen, deepening, misty shades
    Entreat to be embraced.


    Tedious study,
    knowing that only you can bridge,
    from now to then, from here to there.





     
  2. Tye_DyeBrain

    Tye_DyeBrain Member

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    Razor Face- I thought this piece was rad:) ...really liked the line

    "The eyes touch them
    If they can see as seers see"
     
  3. mysti

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    that was good, nice job.
     
  4. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    Thank you for your comments, glad you liked it.
     
  5. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    this was my favorite part:

    'Horizons always blue, all the frozen, deepening, misty shades
    Entreat to be embraced.'
     
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