Torn

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by onelovemarley, Mar 13, 2005.

  1. onelovemarley

    onelovemarley Member

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    this is an old one and kinda sad but i like it..its called Torn

    tired and alone, a thin black line
    a feeling i can't even begin to describe
    the moment i feel it, and know its not fine
    the moment of truth, in deaths design
    what is it for, i never cared
    scared of things, that are never there
    and the bliss is gone, escaped once more
    i felt it go, what was it for
    and all i find is empty promises with broken words
    while it's not me, that you prefered
    cut these strings, that hold me tight
    cause maybe you would make it, be alright
    i'm left to search, what i cannot see
    left to find, what i cannot be
    all i feel is this cold jagged tear
    and see how nothing, will just disappear
    cause deep inside, i'm torn and broken
    i find myself, constantly choking
    what could of been, couldn't have
    because this is me, and i realize i'm nothing better than that
    all i am is a shade less than before
    but i can't take anymore
     
  2. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    such melancholy words, onelovemarley.

    'cut these strings, that hold me tight'

    we've all had that feeling.
     
  3. onelovemarley

    onelovemarley Member

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    thanks again..that one was old
     
  4. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    i love this

    in all i felt while reading
    an overwhelming need to say

    no woman no cry.....................

    thank you for posting your words,
    love n peace from saff.......
     
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