Second poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by buxillafion, Mar 11, 2005.

  1. buxillafion

    buxillafion secretary of pizza

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    Even her mere presence leaves me satisfied.
    Dreams, fantasies blinding me.
    Wich way to salvation, the holy city?
    ZION
    Wich path is the right one?
    Dreams Fantasies blinding me.
    I will forge my own path.
    Leave this confusion far behind.
    But all paths lead to her
    No detours, she is zion.
    She is enlightenment.
    She is beautiful.
     
  2. onelovemarley

    onelovemarley Member

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    i much like your poems...i write aswell

    and zeppelin does rule!!
     
  3. buxillafion

    buxillafion secretary of pizza

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    Thanks alot. Bob Marley rules almost as much as zeppelin!
     
  4. onelovemarley

    onelovemarley Member

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    well i'd have to say zeppelin and marley are two of my fav's
     
  5. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Appreciated this, very pretty. Thanks
     
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