Eau d'Ethanol

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by NRx, Mar 10, 2005.

  1. NRx

    NRx Member

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    I recently wrote this about the first girl I was ever with. She was breath-takingly beautiful and sexy, but also so forbidden. Guess I didn't think about that latter part until it was too late...

    Eau d'Ethanol

    The perfume on her neck

    smelled so sweet -

    like candy -

    I had to have a taste.

    But the flavor

    was of gasoline

    spilled on pavement -

    my lips a match,

    thrown carelessly,

    igniting the puddle.



    02/17/2005
     
  2. nitemarehippygirl

    nitemarehippygirl Senior Member

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    i liked it... it's a really unusual image
     
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