Body Horror

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Negative red, Mar 8, 2005.

  1. Negative red

    Negative red Member

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    Priest, in a sky lit room,
    ink in his blood,
    what can he do,
    what can he do?

    Suprise gift of a stolen kiss,
    taken from an empty room,
    what can i do,
    what can i do?

    Selfless soul sacrafice,
    god owns all you knew,
    taken from a heartless bitch,
    i give it back to you,
    for you.

    Show me the spiders nest,
    the spiders nest of youth,
    buy me a beer,
    this place has lost its truth.

    Priest in a sky lit room,
    ink in his blood,
    what can you do,
    well what can you do?
     
  2. Razor Face

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    My interpretation of this is acceptance and forgiveness. (I rarely interpret poems as the writers intended.) But I liked the way it flowed while I ingested the images and meanings. The repetition worked very well, made it feel like a chant. Beautiful poem, I thought.
     
  3. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    "Priest in a sky lit room,
    ink in his blood,
    what can you do,
    what can you do?"

    I like that...

    Very nice.
     
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