Bending Spines

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Negative red, Mar 8, 2005.

  1. Negative red

    Negative red Member

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    pretty little hate list
    lost in harmony.
    You are so down,
    lost in a world such as this.
    Spaced funkorama,
    baby it is justified.
    Pretty little ape shit,
    my stunk out coffin rot.
    I speak with my eyes open to burn the sun.
    My ray is on order,
    again i lose my sight.
    Driven to the world to hate,
    born not without shame.
    I would return to the womb,
    if i had not grown so big.
    You can't chew and play
    at the same time now tommy,
    this has ruined what was once a beautiful book.
     
  2. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    i love the rhythmic flow of this one.
     
  3. water_dreamer

    water_dreamer I

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    this is really nice, makes me want to start writing again.
     
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