forgive the spelling errors and be kind. but let me know what you think please ~ You are my weakness yes you are my love pandoras box has opened and push have come to shove and my desparation brings me back to you sweet numbing addiction without you,what would i do and the sharpness in your taste and the ruby red ,your flesh has me in a bind again but i reach you in distress so now you are you are my life house without you i cannot breath you make me keep this mask on you make me diseve because you take away true happieness control's your only care after a while thanks for reading Peace im not even there
the feeling behind it has been conveyed, i like, but maybe try it without rhyming next time- it's less confining.
