Growing Older

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Razor Face, Mar 7, 2005.

  1. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    Getting Older

    From thick greens of vibrant weeds
    And fresh joys shared while unaware
    Young dreamers stand to diverge from land
    And till resigned all seasons’ winds.
    Make frail Gods to quake and scorn with flame
    Their new soiled hands that battle.

    And paths opposed duet for life and harm
    Comic rooted figures in soliloquy.

    Schizoid tumbleweeds confusing dust
    Sculpt niches for shelter from self-harm
    Add grandiose their voice to calling winds
    Canvassing whispers to hear their own
    Become prophets charging lambs
    To appease the wrath for fear and failed.

    And paths opposed duet for life and harm
    Comic rooted figures in soliloquy.

    Vistas echo ash in hope
    The gentle burrowed beneath the heat
    Desires wept to arid sands
    Sink deeper still to clutch for stone.
    Deaf to cries and safely shattered voice

    If not for time
    The good would all.. all…
    Surely die of grief.

    And paths opposed duet for life and harm
    Comic rooted figures in soliloquy.

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  2. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    this was beautiful.

    especially

    'Schizoid tumbleweeds confusing dust
    Sculpt niches for shelter from self-harm
    Add grandiose their voice to calling winds
    Canvassing whispers to hear their own
    Become prophets charging lambs
    To appease the wrath for fear and failed.'

    can't believe you haven't read auden before!
     
  3. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    Thank you! Yeah, there's a great deal of poetry I haven't read. I've already found some lines I won't forget and have still only read three or four poems.
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Wait, is this by Auden or Razor Face?
     
  5. Razor Face

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    hah... By razor face. A sure giveaway is the petered out last stanza. But glad you were confused.
     
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