Snow

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pianoperson60, Mar 5, 2005.

  1. pianoperson60

    pianoperson60 Senior Member

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    Snow swirling Snow floating

    White swirls Glitter floats

    Whips Across floating Sky

    A swirling Falling floating Web



    Say it aloud...its fun.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    You're right, that is fun to say. :)


    Could be the start of a great poem, maybe add another stanza with your reaction to this falling floating snow.
     
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

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    Great last line! Hey, enjoy it while you may. Snow's days are almost done!
     
  4. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    'white swirls glitter floats'

    i like that... reminds me of breckenridge, co.
     
  5. Razor Face

    Razor Face Member

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    odd... reads like it would be a tongue twister.. but the L's make the words fall into each other.. cool
     
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