Fallen

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by han_tigger, Jun 7, 2004.

  1. han_tigger

    han_tigger Member

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    Fallen.

    Mud silent,
    porcelain angel,
    dirty,
    with cut-off wings,
    tattered moth,
    lost,
    bleeding tears.
    I never believed your wild sky
    quiet blue storm.
    Bring me gentle peace
    sailing moon.

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    han_tigger, Jun 7, 2004
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  3. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    That's magical, and sad too. I like it a lot.
     
    littleskinny, Jun 7, 2004
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  5. skyfire

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    that was a good poem...nice and short and to the point...i liked it
     
    skyfire, Jun 7, 2004
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  7. han_tigger

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    Thanks 4 the comments!

    Hannah.
     
    han_tigger, Jun 7, 2004
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