i want to feel your shadow i want to feel it inside me i want to feel your shadow i want to be free when you look at me what do you see i feel your shadow in the air; so much i cant bare it i feel it in my heart, for i fear i will not part from my glory please make me holy dont make me the anti-christ for i might betray you give me the whip i want to be your slave
umm...It's a good poem however I personally odnt dig the repetition. But that is a device many people might enjoy.