shadow

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Got_Culture?, Feb 24, 2005.

  1. Got_Culture?

    Got_Culture? Member

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    i want to feel your shadow
    i want to feel it inside me
    i want to feel your shadow
    i want to be free
    when you look at me what do you see
    i feel your shadow in the air; so much i cant bare it
    i feel it in my heart, for i fear i will not part
    from my glory please make me holy
    dont make me the anti-christ for i might betray you
    give me the whip i want to be your slave
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    ooer, this is very.....dark..i thinkl. yeah, dark. hum. shadow empahises the dark nature
     
  3. Liver Steam

    Liver Steam Member

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    I'm afraid of my shadow.
     
  4. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    umm...It's a good poem however I personally odnt dig the repetition. But that is a device many people might enjoy.
     

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