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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Kris?, Feb 15, 2005.

  1. Kris?

    Kris? Senior Member

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    Body count in the daily news
    Murder is the daily chore now
    This is the twenty first century

    Suicide your ally
    Drugs your friend
    And sex your parent

    Twenty first century romance
    Nothing more then abortions
    Condoms being the hope for nirvana

    Body counts on the daily news
    Murder is our daily chore
    Lets go rob and call it grace

    The twenty first century appeal
    Stretching lights from your sports car
    A poor dead boy, nothing but a speed bump

    This is the twenty first century
    With all its romance
    With all its promise

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    Today is just another good excuse to bleed
    Not a single word left to heed
    Now just watch

    As it slowly slides
    As reality no longer abides
    As it goes deeper, deeper, and deeper

    Don’t remember your sin
    It will just bring you down in the end
    Just keep moving towards eternity

    Don’t pick it up now
    You already forgotten how
    Just let it slide

    So today just turned out to be another good day to bleed
    And there is truly not a single good word to heed
    So watch it slowly slide, and reality no longer abides, as it goes deeper in...
     
  2. peacehippy

    peacehippy Member

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    really enjoyed it
     
  3. Kris?

    Kris? Senior Member

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    thanks
     
  4. _chris_

    _chris_ Marxist

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    wow, thats really good. I like the last verse of the first poem, quite chilling though
     
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    LivingLegends Senior Member

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  6. Kris?

    Kris? Senior Member

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    Thanks you.
     
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