new poem on peace, would love to hear any comments/feedback

Give me freedom, or let me die
we all could be passive,
avoiding anger, without asking why
Whats our purpose, why are we here
why should we have to live,
in a world of constant fear
Questions arise, with the option to fight
whose to judge,
if the answers wrong or right
Wanting to make a difference, having our voice heard
not falling into suite,
and becoming part of the herd
Changing the world, easier said than done
why be scared,
or on a constant run
Standing up, preaching from the heart
having them listen,
a revolution, we could start
A new way of life, with happiness & peace
without seeing the news,
another brother has become deceased
Why have another generation, like Vietnam
our opinions matter,
let our voices be the bomb
Talking it out & shaking hands
wouldn't that better,
that enforcing useless bans
Put the guns away & talk from the heart
wouldn't it be easier,
to end a way that didn't start
Join hands & come together as one
until we can rest easy,
knowing our fight for peace, has finally been won

* hoping for any thoughts or suggestions anyone might have! thanks

peace & love

 

i enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.