Shades of excess make the rainbow where metal zombies suck the widow Liver pumpkin Broken elves I suck the milk From The Lover’s Bell---------------------- SING THE SONG YOUR PARENTS SUNG, AND PERMANENTLY STAIN YOUR TOUNGE! ORGASM- KIDNEY SPASM- LOVE EVERY FUCKING ATOM! TTTTTTRRRRRAAAAAAANNNNCCCCCCEEEEEE imgodimgodimgodimgodimgodimgodimgodimgod
Hmmm, are those zombies sucking windows or widows? Lots of graphic imagery here but you don't seem to have a focus. You have to have a centre to make your poem bite.
