Forum Poem: Automobile

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, Feb 10, 2005.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I had an idea for this forum, which I used to do on an AOL message board back in the day. What you do is, someone posts a topic, and everyone writes and posts a poem on that topic in the thread. Sort of a competition, but with no winners...or rather, no losers. Just a fun thing to do. Each new topic should get it's own thread, with the subject title written like this one.

    I'll start it off with something easy: "automobile"

    A Driving Nation

    Mass produced, any color you want
    As long as it's black
    Black like the collective soul
    Of a driving nation
    Hop in your car, neighbor
    And leave me in your dust, your exhaust
    A mobile notion from ocean to ocean
    Where mere motion replaces
    Any and all purposeful action

    Abandoned the community
    The neighbors and friends
    And the strangers in a pub
    What time have we for idle conversation
    When there's places to go
    People to flee?
    So we run to and fro
    To everywhere and nowhere
    But a bottomless pit of isolation

    Who'd have thought it
    A set of rubber wheels and a motor
    A better division than any fence or wall
     
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    too far to walk, some
    where there are wheels, there’s a road
    trip all the way home


    Chuck Berry knows where it's at...

    Maybellene,
    why can't you be true,
    oh, Maybellene,
    why can't you be true,
    you've started back doin' the things you used to do.

    As I was motivatin' over the hill,
    I saw Maybellene in a Coup de Ville,
    A Cadillac a-rollin' on an open road,
    Nothin' will outrun my V-8 Ford,
    The Cadillac doin' about Ninety Five,
    She's bumper to bumper, rollin' side by side.

    Maybellene,
    why can't you be true,
    oh, Maybellene,
    why can't you be true,
    you've started back doin' the things you used to do.

    The Cadillac pulled up ahead of the Ford,
    The Ford got hot, wouldn't do no more.
    It then got cloudy and started to rain.
    I tooted my horn for a passin' lane.
    The rain water blowin' all under my hood,
    I knew, that was doin' my motor good

    Maybellene,
    why can't you be true,
    oh, Maybellene,
    why can't you be true,
    you've started back doin' the things you used to do.

    The motor cooled down, the heat went down,
    And that's when I heard that highway sound.
    The Cadillac asittin' like a ton of lead,
    A hundred an ten, half a mile ahead.
    The Cadillac lookin' like it's sittin' still,
    And I caught Maybellene at the top of the hill.

    Maybellene,
    why can't you be true,
    oh, Maybellene,
    why can't you be true,
    you've started back doin' the things you used to do.





    Encore, Chuck, encore!


    My ding-a-ling

    When I was a little bitty boy
    my grandmother bought me a cute little toy
    Silver bells hangin' on a string
    she told me it was my ding a ling

    My ding a ling, my ding a ling
    I want to play with my ding a ling
    My ding a ling, my ding a ling
    I want to play with my ding a ling

    And then mother took me to Grammer School
    But I stopped all in the vestibule
    Every time that bell would ring
    catched me playin' with my ding a ling

    Once I was climbing the garden wall
    I slipped and had a terrible fall
    I fell so hard I heard bells ring
    but held on to my ding a ling

    Once I was swimming cross Turtle creek
    many snappers all around my feet
    Shure was hard swimming cross that thing
    with both hands holdin' my ding a ling

    This here song it aint so sad
    the cutest little song you ever had
    those of you who will not sing
    You must be playin' with your own ding a ling
    My ding a ling

    Your ding a ling, your ding a ling
    We saw you playin' with your ding a ling
    My ding a ling everybody sing
    I want to play with my ding a ling
     
  3. dewbee

    dewbee Member

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    what a complicated metaphor
    you have invited into your life.
    i am the hitcher,
    and you the driver of your own fate;
    your own
    automobile.

    say i know that there is a way
    there is always the hollow to fill
    the infrastructure is what
    i call the system.
    that's what it is.
    insufficiencies
    shall
    be
    corrected
    in
    time.

    and so
    you pick me up
    for i am a hitcher
    and you drive me where
    we are both going
    in
    your
    automobile.
     
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