something i wrote today

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lumina, Feb 10, 2005.

  1. lumina

    lumina Member

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    There is a sadness
    i can't explain
    alone in this darkness
    i sit here in pain
    he said that he'd stay
    i never though he'd leave
    now theres nothing left to do
    but fall to my knees and grieve
    he took me with him when he left
    but he'll never see
    what pain he caused to my heart
    and what he took from me
     
  2. BraveSirRubin

    BraveSirRubin Members

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    This sounds like a million other poems. There is no uniqueness to it... nothing!
     
  3. Joseph0

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