It's pretty much the same subject I'm stuck on for now, but a very different style. It's a little more overtly dirty and angry than I'm normally capable of, but it was bursting to get out. I actually find this rather funny and entertaining. It's not to be taken seriously at all. My back's about to snap And my legs are getting tired I'm so goddamn sore I can't take you anymore I bow down to you, my sire You've set little me on fire But I know very well all you care about Is how loud you make me scream So I'll find someone else to send me flowers Fuck you, you're so sour And I don't want to be ignored Though you admit you often do It's not your fault, the blame's all mine For laying beneath you I think I've gone brain dead From running my mouth to you You don't hear a word Just say it's absurd There's nothing for me to do Except wag my ass at you I know very well all you care about Is how sexy I can be I'll find someone else to send me flowers Fuck you, you're so sour And I don't want to be ignored Though you admit you often do It's not your fault, the blame's all mine For opening up to you I know very well all you care about Is how obedient I am I'll find someone else to send me flowers Fuck you, you're so sour You've lost all your power
Every time I read your stuff, I swear I can hear music behind it! I liked the vibe this one had… those sarcastic tones always work for me. Good to see you posting more lately, and I’ll be looking forward to reading more. my fav lines
You hear music because I'm actually writing lyrics now. It's cool that you can tell. I love when you reply to my stuff.
wow....i really loved your poem...kind of feel i can relate to it to...just that feeling of arrrgghhh fuck you!!but then you still love them.... well..hope to read mooore!!! *peace* Suzanne x x x
