"In A crowded Room"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dewaholic, Feb 6, 2005.

  1. dewaholic

    dewaholic Member

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    In a Crowded Room

    two strangers lock their gaze,
    Their lust for one another
    instantaneously blaze

    No knowledge of her name
    Some way he had to find out more,
    He had to find out just
    Of the feelings she had implored

    Fearlessly he strolls over
    In his sexiest voice he says "hi"
    She begins to talk & says
    "I was looking at that other guy"
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    i initially thought this was gonna be fairytale like with the 2 strangers falling in love etc, but i liked the twist at the end:) awesome
     
  3. fabioula

    fabioula Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    thats real!everybody does seem to look the other day
     
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